Rational Emergency

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Rational Emergency

Hey I have just posted a new song I wrote for/dedicated to RRS called Rational Emergency

http://www.myspace.com/angelofviolationband

 

Any comments would be very much appreciated, thankyou.


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I wanted to listen, but

I wanted to listen, but alas, the media player never loaded.


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Please don't take offense

Please don't take offense but I understood two words in the whole song, genocide and god.  Could you post lyrics?  The lyrics on your page didn't load.

 

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religioniswar wrote: Hey I

religioniswar wrote:

Hey I have just posted a new song I wrote for/dedicated to RRS called Rational Emergency

http://www.myspace.com/angelofviolationband

 

Any comments would be very much appreciated, thankyou.

If you cut out the unbearable crooning, you'd have a decent cybergrind project on your hands.  You're mixing some very odd sounds, and it's not working.  Focuse your energy on the cybergrind, maybe beef up the vocals a bit, and you'll be a contender.  


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Thanks for the responses

Thanks for the responses here is the lyrics for the sake of Sapient (and whoever else is not used to harsh vocals)

 

Rational Emergency

 

Blasphemy, Blasphemy
Blasphemy, Blasphemy

[Verse]
A rotten cross marks the spot
Around there necks they hang
Glorious, self sacrifice
Bloody hands, selfish fucks
Ignoarant crusades and genocide
Marching towards the grave
Innocent women violated in the name
Of the mighty god


[Pre-Chorus]

Rise up, try justify this shit
Stand up, this storys getting old
Rise up, ignorance is not strength
Stand up, War is not peace


[Chorus]

We have an emergency of rationality
With consequences so fucked up
Its hard to imagine such terror
I find it hard to justify this
Rational emergency
Lets sacrifice are daughters
And spill much virgin blood
Can you justify this horor
Try to justify this trauma

[Verse 2]

Bloodstained symbols of ignorance
Old stories of chineese whispers
Corrupted and deformed
Bless the guy who blew up
Its raining in blood and corruption
Raping, torture and murder
Such awful things to hear
Traumatised children fear


[Pre-Chorus]

Rise up, try justify this shit
Stand up, this storys getting old
Rise up, ignorance is not strength
Stand up, War is not peace


[Chorus]

We have an emergency of rationality
With consequences so fucked up
Its hard to imagine such terror
I find it hard to justify this
Rational emergency
Lets sacrifice are daughters
And spill much virgin blood
Can you justify this horor
Try to justify this trauma

Blasphemy, Blasphemy
Blasphemy, Blasphemy

Try again if you would like to listen it should be working fine now. And by the way no offence taken about not understanding words. I used to struggle understanding harsh vocals and still do sometimes. So thanks for the responses look forward to hearing more.

Thanks.