3025 A.E, not AD By Brian37 a poem
Offline 3025A.E. By Brian37
Churches started
From Jail House Rock
Are just as phoney
As Kwanza's Mannorah
In 3k years
Pluss 25
Will people worship "The force"
Skywalker's sacrafice?
And Tom Cruise
Keeps alive
The myth of the cross
New details thrive
In his version
You take stalk
Jesus is the product
Of green men from mars
Bibleo Helos
Most dont know
Is what they read
And defend to the death
Dawkins is right
About the light bulb
The moth prefures comfort
Insted of reality
J.K. wrote
About a majical boy
Who flys on a broomstick
To save the world
A suprise in the least
If to be
A war between
Harry and little green Jesus
If Churches for Elvis
Can exist
I can emagine
What will come next
A mushroom cloud
Over Sky daddy penis
The lemmings do bidding
Over nothing but fiction
If we are not moths
We must determine light
Not by emotions
But by reality
The calander for Jews
Is Not AD
Nor the Chinese
Year of the rat
After Jesus
Is after Yahwey
Is after Allah
And after the monkey
And to worship Elvis
Is to fly on a broomstick
To use the Force
Placing Jesus on Mars
There never will be
An after Jesus
Or after Elvis
Only the moths
Killing themselves
Needlessly
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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I said it last time, and I'll say it again: you could give William McGonagall a run for his money.
Thank you. I wish my ADD didnt aflict me to the point of the last time of that comment.
Who is William McGonagall? I guess I am supposed to be flattered to be put in such company. But the only thing I am flattered about is that anyone actually reads my poems.
First, thank you. Secondly who is William McGonagall?
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/William_McGonagall
He was a poet and you didn't even know it! LOL!!!!
Oh, I should listen to a "theist", shit, next thing you'll tell me is that being nice is good. YOU ARE SUCH AN ASSHOLE!
(Note to self: Did I think that, or type it?: btw Brian37, just because a theist posted the link, doesnt mean you'll get cooties clicking on it)
Oh btw Captian. Never try to compete with me on punns or cornball humor. I have caused more eyes to roll and voices to groan than pepper spray.
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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I got it now.
So now we have some sort of Simon Cowel criticising my work. So. If people look at meter and laguage, they might make a case. If I was writing it for people who write "dog wistle" poetry, you'd have a case.
My focus is not in perfection, but message. The message is quite simple in this poem. In 3000 years it would not suprise me in the least if people litterally believed in "the force" as litterally as they believe in Jesus and Allah. There are people who worship Elvis like a god.
The point of the poem is that Dawkins is right about religion being a missfire. Insted of looking for real answers, we seek comfort first. We end up burning ourselves out on the lightbulb, insted of following the moonlight.
Plato's Allegory Of The Cave is what I have in mind here.
If form is what your after, I am not your guy, and never claimed to be a master of forum. I dont try to write poetry so high pitched that even dogs cant hear it. If you dont consider it poetry, I could give a shit less. The message is what is important.
Go hang out in Oxford and date Muffy if you wish. Humanity consists of more than one class.
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
Check out my poetry here on Rational Responders Like my poetry thread on Facebook under Brian James Rational Poet, @Brianrrs37 on Twitter and my blog at www.brianjamesrationalpoet.blog
LOL
"Hitler burned people like Anne Frank, for that we call him evil.
"God" burns Anne Frank eternally. For that, theists call him 'good.'
Well, it would be cool if the Force was real - I mean, I'd rather have Darth Vader than George Bush running the country(I mean, America is the Empire).
I hope that when the world comes to an end I can breathe a sigh of relief, because there will be so much to look forward to.
'Bout time you cought up with the rest of us.
Yes, except that I'm not English, and I'm far wittier than Simon. And I wouldn't call what you did "work." At least I sincerely hope you didn't put more than a few minutes effort into that.
Meaning, if people looked at poetry, they might have a case.
Right...
That, I'm afraid, goes without saying.
Indeed.
And here you could have just written that instead of trying to put it into some miscarriage of verse.
I'm sure Plato would be proud.
I hate to find myself saying the same thing over and over, but that also goes without saying.
I once spoke to a man who had a message. He told me that he was going to marh down the street, back and forth, proclaiming his message loudly. When I pointed out that he had no legs, and couldn't march, he became quite angry. The message, he told me, was the important part.
Your class would be kindergarten, I would assume?
Brian37 ~ Don't you pay any attention to LosingStreak06.
I got it and I liked it.
I think it's so outstanding that there are people who will still write poetry.
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Suck my dick. Like I said, I could give a shit less what you call it. And I could give a shit less if you dont like it. Maybe you dont like it because you have "theist" above your avatar, and this poem challenges rediculous claims.
So go cut the crust off your PB&J, make sure you use your salad fork, and dont fuck Muffy up the ass, anal retentive pricks cant get their needle dicks into something that tight.
Hickory dickory dock
I wrote this verse
For a prick
Who cares about package
Who has no package
Who doesnt have
A dick to suck.
Like I said, you may not like my forum, but I think you got the message.
"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
Check out my poetry here on Rational Responders Like my poetry thread on Facebook under Brian James Rational Poet, @Brianrrs37 on Twitter and my blog at www.brianjamesrationalpoet.blog
A masterful response. I would have expected nothing less from such a prodigious weaver of language.
"Holy flame wars, batman"
Said the rapper to the scatman
In the rythmn of a can-can
But the meter didn't scan, dan.
Still the rapper had a plan, man.
(Poor Muffy's ass was at hand)
So he poked his thang and then ran.
Seems the rapper was a scat fan.
My Artwork
Brain said "Suck my dick"
My reply wasn't too quick
I wrote this down
Without a frown
And then pressed "Post Comment"
Losingstreak, you don't go to CE do you?
No, but if he did I would surely know.
No, I try to avoid the social boards whenever possible.
Have you seen me there?