Critics, By Brian37

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Critics, By Brian37

Critics, By Brian37

You are the dolt

Who entered the demolition

The paint has a scratch

Forgetting the substance

The masses don’t drive

A Dallorian

Or understand

Carburetors brands

I knew a Holly

4 times the power

The shell of rust

Yet still robust

You’d complain

Of cold fries

Missing the apathy

Warbucks induced

Corporate camps

With Auschwitz slogans

It’s done this way

Without exception

I never knew

A thermos that cared

About what you drive

Or where you work

Call this fecal

For all I care

My Pacer’s ignition

Needs no repair


You’d twitch over crow’s feet

Invading her eyes

And would dump her

If she gained an ounce

And for good measure

Just for your pleasure

I’ll drive my GEO

The quarter mile

 

And add this irritating line

ADD has to be

Your only friend

For Tiffany and Macys

Are where you shop

I’d rather drowned

In Texas hot sauce

Than submit to crumpets

Being my boss

So if these words

Create acid reflux

My final words are

“Go get fucked.”

"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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Your poetry is very good for

Your poetry is very good for someone who has a mild to moderate learning disability. That's the most sincere compliment that I can give you.