Angler Fish, by Brian37

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Angler Fish, by Brian37

The following poem is an indictment on humanity's failure to see that utopias don't exist and how humans get sucked into hurting other humans over the idea of a utopia when the fact is there is no such thing.

Angler Fish, By Brian37

The bait of utopia
The words of charisma
Ended the lives
Of those in Gayana

Bitter almonds
Mixed in aid
The cool fooling
His promise to save

The Arian eyes
And golden locks
God’s chosen ones
Conquer Bravaria

The missals slam
In towers of two
Allah’s minions
His biddings do

The angler’s bait
Is utopian fraud
Infantile need
To control the mob

And those of the same
Who wish only to love
Suffer by hands
Of utopian fraud

The angler fish
Offers you food
Dangerous placebos
In order to woo

You nibble at first
And then you gorge
It is too late
Your in it’s grasp

Then the outsiders
Become outcasts
Easy to slaughter
You become their martyr

Enticing bait
Felonious jerk
Back and forth
It springs it’s trap

The hunger of want
The hunger of need
Draws you in
Until you submit

The angler fish
Catches laymen and wise
Harvard grads
And dolts alike

Give me an apple
I’ll make you white
The grand Marshal
Of all that is right

The lure of utopia
Grand it its mention
Merely the infant
In all of us

Crying for attention.

"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
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Our revels now are ended. These our actors, | As I foretold you, were all spirits, and | Are melted into air, into thin air; | And, like the baseless fabric of this vision, | The cloud-capped towers, the gorgeous palaces, | The solemn temples, the great globe itself, - Yea, all which it inherit, shall dissolve, | And, like this insubstantial pageant faded, | Leave not a rack behind. We are such stuff | As dreams are made on, and our little life | Is rounded with a sleep. - Shakespeare


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SON OF A BITCH, the edit

SON OF A BITCH, the edit function doesnt work on my op.

I realized my typo after I submitted the title and the post. Could someone please correct the title to Angler instead of Angeler, FUCK.


 

"We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus -- and nonbelievers."Obama
Check out my poetry here on Rational Responders Like my poetry thread on Facebook under Brian James Rational Poet, @Brianrrs37 on Twitter and my blog at www.brianjamesrationalpoet.blog


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There is never an edit

There is never an edit function for the OP ... That way it can't change as to back track.

  Yeah, there is no possible perfect utopia in this life of yin yang, yet it can be an important dream of a better world for all. Umm, what is utopia for a sociopath??? Yicks.

  Cool poem dude .... "Crying for attention."  Oh yeah ....


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Just for you, Brian, as a

Just for you, Brian, as a special favor, I fixed your typo...

Now that's gonna cost ya!

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